Tuesday, June 19, 2007

Clouds!!



Like an empty canvas
She waits
A lady’s drowned black hair
Let loose
Little pearls she decides
To adorn tonight
Wide eyed grinning
Sipping fluid from
A mysterious crystal

Day light finally breaks
Never mind your predictions
The silence pockets you in its
Beautiful peace
White snow-like flakes join
A gentle dance they perform
Forming shapes and tales
For you and me to unfold

Beyond what you see lies
A region of imagination
Tranquil and Serene
Intoxicating you in its charm
You can gaze for hours
And never tire

The story teller comes alive
And you vision a little plot
Of chariots and fire
Until in a maze of
Clouded thoughts you
Remain comfortably entangled


Transformations
She melts into tender rain
Spits lightening
Envelops your mind
Setting you free
For a brief moment
you feel her on your skin
Sublime

Until beams of light
Restore those dancing patterns
For us to watch
Once Again!

- Rini



6 comments:

9 said...

beautiful.. wonderful...

Ms. Lane said...

lol thanks again.. i know m gettin too boring huh..lol

smoke said...

rini... something very different about this one. wait, have i said that before? but really, there is! and who said there cant be two "different" kinda poems?

anyway great cloud poem, woman! it was especially special when i read it this morning in class when i was feeling all cloudy... and rainy... and looming skies-y. hehe. you get it!

cm chap said...

Good one. You have a very good blog..sply ur template and photos r amazing.

Janhavi said...

uhmm do i know u??? i mean srsly u aint rini right?? or r u?? aaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh riniiiiiii!!!! i knew u were an amazing poet but thissss!!! omg!! its like OUT OF THE WORLLDDDD POETRY !!!!!! *bows to u* gr8 work sis!!! ooo m ashamed to call myself ur sis now.. cos me nothin in front of u !! but hell lol my sis bestest!!! keep em comin!!!

Anonymous said...

very nice... :)