Tuesday, July 03, 2007

Inhale!

Maybe the mistakes she makes she is bound to make them all over again. She looks around and searches frantically finding that vacuum that she was once scared of. She runs and she fears it will eat her one day. She threatens to give up and take the plunge off the cliff into that deep blue endless pool of crystal water that looked so beautiful but had nothing to offer. Then like pearls strung together to make a necklace for a voice, she hears a call. The voice would make her strong and inspire her to believe some day; it asks her to sit down and assures her she is not moving the train is. Just watch from the glass and you will feel the voice says. Feel the beauty in a little child’s giggle, in raindrops and yellow skies and the warmth of a loving hand. They walk through the door watching time pass by from a moving train. Eyes watch them suspecting a breakdown or a fall at each step but they just breathe and walk on. The train of life speeds away through the hills and seas. The sound louder than ever now. The voice whispered you cannot jump off the train the feeling glued her onto the seat.The rains might bring in something special. Music and melody might combine after all to form that one perfect song.

Take time off to feel life enter you.. just inhale.. breathe!


7 comments:

Anonymous said...

My god. Four times after reading this, I am still speechless.

Anonymous said...

Poof. That's me exhaling. How, how, how do you do it? like pearls strung together to make a necklace for a voice, she hears a call Such beautiful imagery! Hats off to you. Seriously.

Janhavi said...

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*i'm speechless*

9 said...

no.. i cant travel this way anymore, in this poetry train.. im jumpin off.. o wait.. rain n rini might combine after all to form one perfect scene.. :P tooo gooooood.. !!!

Ms. Lane said...

Strange reactions i see.. breathe ppl breathe..lolz and thanks for stopping by feels nice to be appreciated! :D

Manasa. K .Kumar said...

" Feel the beauty in a little child’s giggle, in raindrops and yellow skies and the warmth of a loving hand"and "she is not moving , the train is"

see ive started memorizing rinz !
i dont even know the lines of my own poem and now i know urs ! what have u done to me ! lol


btw its not as complicated as the others think it is ! so chill, the music and the melody combine ...to form you and thats just a crystallised interpretation of ur work ! lol

tata
keep em coming !
tc

Saza said...

hey i haven't been on the blogs for a while...but gud to know you're still keeping up with it...every time i read your stuff they seem better and better...gud for you for reflecting and keeeping your creative side going!