When all the fake smiles tend to fade
and melt away
the glow of numbness
manages to switch off
In the darkness I discover
myself with a flickering crimson mate
I embrace and enter
A blazing flame finishing
a cube
I find my rest
in the pool of ashes
the fire and I become one
3 comments:
"embrace and enter"..hmmm..sounds like you're describing..wink wink
"A blazing flame finishing
a cube
I find my rest
in the pool of ashes
the fire and I become one"
Heyya brat!! am speechless.. juz outta words.. !! juz love these lines.. and envy you to gettin them right.. he he.. i always wanted to write something like this.. could imagine it, but never got the right words... WOW!! simply Fabulaso!! Superb!! Great work!!
Man!! These lines remind me of a Phoenix embracin fire and burnin down to ashes and reincarnating.. On my blogger "The bird perished in the flames; but from the red egg in the nest there fluttered aloft a new one the one solitary Phoenix bird"
GREAT WORK RINI!!
It's really really really niche niche ...loved these lines though (as usual ) it took me some time to relate ...."the glow of numbness
manages to switch off"
take care ...
keep 'em coming
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