amused
deluded
insulted
i try to forget
afraid to live
slips away
like the water in my hand
sun's going down
calling out to me
another day's gone
chemicals in my head
bleed into reactions
underneath a blanket of mystery
i lie on a bed silence.
moon rises
showing me colours
i faintly see
i hide
hide from myself.
i'm sleeping
in sweet seclusion
don't wake me
stop!!!
stop undressing
my past.
Muscial breaths:'Comfortably Numb' Pink Floyd
11 comments:
man you should write more
ok this is what i got of it... its a hangover right? depressed and drunk... or drunk and therefore depressed... wee hours of the morning, you wake up at this almost hostile environment... so far away from home... ... its the chemicals in my head bit that sent me in this direction...
"i loved the chemicals in my head
bleed into reactions" line... nice
rubber soul: thanx
eternal flunky:lol.dunno why or wat made me write this ya maybe garbel n jivon( ppl in my head) jus got back from a party n came up with that..crap is wat i see it as.(psst..i don drink tried a lot just can't :(
lollll ....
yuppity im kinda in ur theme of ur poem mood ALWAYS ....well firstly cuz of MAH ISKOOL...second cuz of MAH TEACHERSSSS..n yea EXAMS
lol ju finished up an exam n this is mah free time out for like half our then get back to readin ENGLISH yes english ...lol madness i know
neway GRT GRT work of urs ...uber cool phrases u used there!
keep goin n tata
manasa
Hey rini... well i'm really sick of gushing, you know? so let's skip all that.
really liked the short lines, made it all jerky and... nice. well, you get what i'm trying to get at.
loved the moon rises stanza and the last two lines were awesome!
Keep the mignisht oil burning if this is the result of it! Who cares if you become an insomniac or a zombie, as long as we have good reading material. :D
Hehehe. Awesome friend, ain't i?
P.S.: Garbel and Jivon were at the party. You didn't know? It was I who got them drunk, actually. You're welcome!
P.P.S.: "Comfortably Numb"!! Dont even get me started :D :D :D
ur missin out on some crazy experiences no poet should miss out on... read any rimbaud?
ya well i am a sad deprived poet.
and ya have read exactly one the "sleeper in the valley" u'r talking bout arthur rimbaud right??
no man! rambo first blood..
uh huh!!
hey anonymous commenter
thanx i can see u've been commenting on all my posts u have blog wud luv to see??
Super color scheme, I like it! Good job. Go on.
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