right through me
smile
wonderful spell
one moment
i'm stronger than ever
another
stupid maybe not clever
suddenly seems like a drug
i can't do without
i find pink cute
sappy songs
star-studded nights
appeal.
life complete
confused
like never before
i'm sure of something
i can't comprehend
million reasons given
when i seek just one
i've never felt so naive
vulnerable and crazy
was lost on my own
i agree
but now i am
lost and crazy
i link it all,
realize
crazy me is
just me and you
Musical breaths: Santana feat Michelle Branche "I'm feeling you"
8 comments:
writers note : its crappy stupid and meaningless i KNOW so dont bother tellin me it sucks..lol jus somethin written on a lazy afternoon. enjoy it if u can :)
Now, what did I say self-ridiculing? Other than the fact that only I should do it (cos, well, i truly can't write poetry), you should just learn to accept these truths (ie, that my blogroll for u is true!)!
So...
My favourite was:
i'm sure of something
i can't comprehend
million reasons given
when i seek just one
Now, you either have to stop writing poetry or my fave quotes list is gonna get longer and longer. Well for the sake of poetry i guess i must make this sacrifice. Sigh.
Keep writing! :D
Er... I forgot to mention. I envy. I envy.
oh and also that you seem to have chosen the title of a britney spears song for your poem's title. LOL LOL LOL LOL. Awesome, rini, keep it up! hehehe.
jana 1:...lol thanks i'll keep providing you with good quotes...
Jana2: Hehehe
jana3:nooooooooooooooooo not britney spears say more like narles barkley...
oi oi
lol shld i say tht was one of ur most meaninful poems evan ...lollll serious ...(or maybe cuz i got so low in mah english pre mid term!!!)
hehe neway keep it goin
byeee
manasa
I'm slightly clueless.. :-S
da rodent: good ur meant too
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