Saw crash today was absolutely fantastic..the below is pretty much inpsired by the movie..pls do watch it, brilliant script some power house performances..
Will this night never end?
I wait in agony for
The dawn to come
To just feel the air
Enter me
And just for a moment
Become
Lifeless
Yet so powerful
Will slashing my nerves
Do the trick
Am I being just another Keats?
Escaping
Falling
Traveling.
To another
Eternity.
Shining
Steel
Cold weapon
Its all clear now.
I need to this.
Just to feel my existence.
I might not recover.
But I won't regret this.
I'm alive!
And I have the power to end this
Or make this a beginning.
I have the choice.
For once!
14 comments:
lovely!! so touching jus like you
moves me to tears!!
hi
beautiful poem da!omg how do u keep writing so easily so well.
hey!!!rinz remember me? got ur link from nidhi.
great work!..loved it all i can see you havent lost your touch at all your just get better ,anyway miss you loads gal please come back to cal this place sucks without you!!..nope m not joking it does..trust me! love Jamz
anonymous: who r u?
ash: hi, ash who?
c:thanx crap comes naturally to me
jamal: oh my god its been ages, how are you,bein all nice to me heh what hap to "i hate rini let her go where she wants theory" :) neways i miss cal too, esp our writing and voice modulation sessions!!give regds to the rest.
duh....
To many metaphors... I lost my way
Err.. where you contemplating suicide???
hey gal great work..you rock keep posting love the free verse's and ya the stories too.damn kewl.when u coming back?..miss you.luv nidhi
Aw... I feel like a heel! Ten comments already? Sigh... well guess I'll have to get used to being last from now on. So many faithful fans, after all! :D You could regulate some traffic my way! ;)
Amazing poem, one of your better poems, as I said. And I do hope you weren't contemplating suicide as someone said. If you weren't, nice--if rather macabre--imagination. If not, CHILL WOMAN!
Jan: thanx jan will let u know as soon as i post so that u can be the first to comment. now m sure why i wrote this poem..crash and loads more...
lol i guess ill write stuff like this hopefully wen i see crash lol
awesum workkk there
u keep goin
manasa
hey, really nice poem... very ode to a nightingale-ish, which i'm sure is what you were referring to in one of the lines...
normally have a mental block against oscar-type films but now i have to see crash!
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