standing alone in my silence
fearing you'll never know
struggling through the way
you've been before
dreams fading away
like the path you took
taking what you learnt
leaving out the rest
the stars are off tonight
shying away behind
the deep dark cloud
leaves sway
but no one knows
which way the wind will blow next
paid by pain is my pulse
trying to breath through life
existence is rarely free
is your reality just a dream
or are you caught somewhere
in between..
Musical breaths : "You and me"- lifehouse
5 comments:
Haha! What is the co-incidence! I just wrote a few verses about how we face reality and see mirages.. :)
& Nope.. Reality isn't a dream.. I'm definitely stuck somewhere inbetween..
Loved the lines;
"the stars are off tonight
shying away behind
the deep dark cloud
leaves sway
but no one knows
which way the wind will blow next"
Awesome!!!!
Anyway, wish you a very Happy New Year! :)
Cheers!
& I've linked you.. Hope you don't mind.. :)
as usual im staring at mah screen dont know how to tell ya how much u rock at this ...its just not poetry ...now i hafta find a name for this !
rock on !
P.S~me read it five times or more before it registered in mah head :)
Hmm.... wassup with the all bluey look :P
Read this poem like 8-9 times each and everytime it gave me a new idea all together, i dono maybe thats why you named it PULSE, i mean you think its all the same all the 72 times/min but it never is always has somethin different to it. Oh well am putting in too much of thought into this, w/e an amazin poem really captivating jus like hehe the person, who wrote it :D
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