Friday, September 15, 2006











What lies beyond this sea?
You have all left
gone away from me
far .. .. ..far.
My thoughts, my dreams
all lie somewhere beyond this sea,
riding on a never tiring horse.
I walk making patterns on the sand
doing a small dance
to the melody of the sea.
each wave i watch unvieling
a secret
promising me
a return.
a comeback.

MUSICAL BREATHS:The Calling "Wherever you will go"

7 comments:

Manasa. K .Kumar said...

WOAH real niche niche ..mes doesnt know watcha say

Anonymous said...

:)

Da Rodent said...

Hmm..... and you are waiting for something.. na., someone.. :P

Ms. Lane said...

yea i await someone..don we all mr.rodent? :P

Da Rodent said...

@rini: aw.. alright.. me not saying anything :-S :P :P

Arvind said...

Beyond the sea lies another land...
Are you looking to meet some interesting guy from Thailand or the likes?? :P
(Sorry, I think humour is slowly leaving my side :P)

Nice poem!!
I see you're a hopeless romantic...
And, I'm not! :P

Love the lines 'dance to the melody of the sea' (with picture evidence of course :P)
Cheers!

Ms. Lane said...

arvind: when i wrote this one ..i was going through one of those lack of inspiration phases where the muse or the like failed to visit me..sooooo i wouldnt call myself a hopeless romantic a "hope"less poet indeed :P