A symbol of mystery,
misery and fear.
loneliness
evil and occult
found in you
a synonym.
to me at times
errie
but always constant
even and unaffected
in you're arms
i find refuge
here no one can see
the tears that flow
i can risk being me
no makeup
additions required
i feel at ease finally
black makes it possible
oh! darkness
what would i have done without you!
silence u gift me
thats all i want
all i need.
MUSICAL BREATHS : "Across the universe" Beatles
8 comments:
Whoaaaa girl! Is this the one you were calling "vague"?! No way...! It's awesome Miss Bardess. Came online to check something out on modern poetry and well... this sure is that!
Your best, as far as I'm concerned! Yes, even better than serendipity :P
LOL...
its awesum in a serious 'penultimate' dark essential mysterious thomping
way !
hiding in the dark.. such a neat way to hide from the world.
still wondering how u can hide away from da world ....by hidin in da darkness ....well wen the darkness is like right inside this crappy world of ours its so full of it ....even wenya walk with a neon outfit ur so full of dark circles n opaque emotions
sitting in the dark gives a feeling like you are totally alone., with no one around you. And., added to you state of mind you tend to ignore the world beyond the darkness of your room. Basically 'hiding in the dark' :)
mmmmmmm
i normally hate commenting bout poems i write but jus wanted to add to the above comments tat..to me darkness yes does symbolize a sort of hidding area but here its more a kind of haven i have bulit within me a surreal world where i exist where only I am its a self- centered idea of a world i created exclusively for me..ok m lost and i can see u yawn..aah forget it i cant really describe the feeling!
ow i am gettin watya saying ....jus dat i dont get to be in dat place very often cuz mah friends bring me out of it ...n well i jus dont like it much ...jus prefer watchin ndtv n saying omg thnk god im better off while watchin rohan vyavaharkar n sonali chander -only mah fav reporters evah
now aint i livin in da sunshine daisy world
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