Broken pieces
all around.
Someone else is sweeping fragments
that i never found.
I awaken a million things sleeping inside.
Most people are hardly ever here
the rest of them
live to disappear.
Fear overpowers
I don't want to be you
I never can.
My today is here
and tomorrow has to come
A mirror
keeps me honest.
With your eyes I see me
doubting my sanity.
{from now on each post will be accompanied with a song revlevant}
Musical breaths :UNWELL by MATCHBOX 20
7 comments:
woah
tht was wayyy awesum!
yea n the songy thingy was cool ...lol am not concentratin n writin now ..jus donno wat to say bout ur poems!!!
byeeeeeee n keep rockin
manasa
verrrrry nice... its really wierd mankind's obsession with sanity and insanity... i'm planning a post on the same. but hey, really nice poem :)
i love the guitarwork on matchbox 20's bent.
Man, as I said, you're just getting better and better. Keep up the quantity, quality seems directly proportional to it!
Oh and I'm adding the lines,
A mirror
keeps me honest.
With your eyes I see me
doubting my sanity.
to my favourite quotes.
manasa: thanx u reading my stuff is wayyy too much credit itself.
abhinav:ya everyone seems to be wondering about sanity, the sane think rest are insane and viceversa.n ya matchbox has sum g8 guitar work.
jana:honoured to have u pick my lines as one of ur fav qoutes.thanx:)
ok i'm not too much into poetry and stuff coz it ALWAYS seems to fly past over me head, but this was good, really good, almost refreshing except for the colour combos on the screen that made me think I was on LSD or something :) Nice stuff.
I love your website. It has a lot of great pictures and is very informative.
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I say briefly: Best! Useful information. Good job guys.
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